Monday, March 9, 2009

Week 7

Assignment:  Write a story that has one person traveling, one person waiting, and one of the people has a package for the other one.

Concept: 
Person Traveling:  Man who is delivering rings
Person Waiting:  Bill is waiting for the man to bring rings to propose to his girlfriend
Package:  It was supposed to be rings but the man grabbed the wrong suitcase and ended up with someone's clothes by mistake
 
A man, Bill, wanted to order an engagement ring from the same man that his father got his mom's wedding ring.  Bill gets a hold of the man and the man offers to fly in with a selection of rings for Bill.  Bill is a rather wealthy man and agrees to this proposal.  Bill goes to the airport to wait for the man with the rings.  Bill has already prepared all the other accommodations for the proposal to his girlfriend tonight.  They are to meet at the restaurant where the waiter will bring out the ring on the dessert tray after they eat their meal.  The man flying in with the rings flight was delayed and arrives only an hour before Bill was supposed to be at the restaurant.  The man carrying the rings was in a frenzy at the airport and happened to grab the wrong suitcase as he boarded the plane.  He was unaware of this until he opened it to show Bill the rings.  When the man opened the suitcase both men were very upset, Bill didn't have a ring and the other man lost a lot of very special jewelry.  With no time to spare Bill stops and picks up a ring-pop from the store and gives it to the waiter at the restaurant only seconds before his girlfriend arrives.  After dinner the waiter brings out the ring-pop and the girl is overjoyed when Bill proposes shouting "yes" and kissing him.  "Oh, you remembered I was eating a ring-pop the first time we met."  The man smiled and whispered "yes" in the woman's ear.  Bill could not have planned a more romantic proposal.  After Bill offered the man who came a large sum of money to make up for some of what he had lost on his trip.  Bill thanked him endlessly saying how he couldn't be happier that he grabbed the wrong suitcase.

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